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VIDEO COACH
Maki reviews your new TikTok posts automatically at 10:00pm each day, identifies what is losing attention or weakening purchase intent, and shows you how to improve the next video.
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Daily review history
Sat, 31 Oct 2026
Coaching report
OPEN VIDEO63/ 100
Visual hook
The extreme keyboard close-up and large £25 text make the product and value obvious instantly. The hand movement adds useful motion.
Text hook
Price is the strongest hook. “These are actually so good” is generic; make the claim measurable with sound, feel or features.
Body & pacing
Use the keyboard’s strongest sensory proof — clean sound test, RGB, switch feel — in the first five seconds, then stop. Avoid repeating the value claim without new evidence.
Sales argument
Two saves from 553 views suggest some value intent, but low engagement and watch time show the demonstration did not build enough desire. Price plus sensory proof is the route to conversion.
Call to action
Add one unambiguous purchase reason: “For £25, hear this — tap the basket before it goes back up.”
Retention
Average watch was 4.4s on a 25s video, completion 2.6%, and the largest drop was at 0:02. The visual earns attention, but the next beat is not strong enough.
Fix these first
Highest-impact changes
["Make the sound test the first beat","Replace generic praise with three concrete proofs","Cut to 12–15 seconds and state the CTA"]
Stronger replacement
Improved video concept
Open with one clean keypress sound and the text “This £25 keyboard sounds like £100.” Rapidly show sound, RGB and detachable cable, then price/CTA by 10–12 seconds.