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VIDEO COACH
Maki reviews your new TikTok posts automatically at 10:00pm each day, identifies what is losing attention or weakening purchase intent, and shows you how to improve the next video.
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Sat, 31 Oct 2026
Coaching report
OPEN VIDEO65/ 100
Visual hook
The new console reveal and named-game promise are relevant, but the opening should show one of those recognisable titles running immediately.
Text hook
“Finally arrived and updated” plus a list of nostalgic games is specific and commercially useful. Lead with the single most recognisable game rather than the arrival story.
Body & pacing
There is plenty of product proof, but too many titles and claims compete. Choose three games, show them, and move quickly to no Wi-Fi, price and CTA.
Sales argument
The product/audience match is strong and the comment/save show some intent. Low watch time prevents the detailed game list from becoming a buying case.
Call to action
Use a nostalgia-led CTA after proof: “If Simpsons Hit & Run was your childhood, this is in the basket.”
Retention
The main drop was at 0:02; average watch was 4.62s on 38s and completion 2.4%. The strong title list is not being shown quickly enough.
Fix these first
Highest-impact changes
["Open on the most recognisable game playing","Limit the list to three visual proofs","Deliver price/no-Wi-Fi/CTA by 15 seconds"]
Stronger replacement
Improved video concept
Open on Simpsons Hit & Run gameplay: “This £X handheld finally has Simpsons, Bully and San Andreas — with no Wi-Fi.” Three one-second game clips, portability proof, then CTA by 15 seconds.