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VIDEO COACH
Maki reviews your new TikTok posts automatically at 10:00pm each day, identifies what is losing attention or weakening purchase intent, and shows you how to improve the next video.
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Sat, 31 Oct 2026
Coaching report
OPEN VIDEO57/ 100
Visual hook
The reply bubble gives context and FIFA is a recognisable niche, but the opening should show FIFA gameplay immediately rather than explaining first.
Text hook
Answering a real viewer question is credible and specific. State the exact answer in the first sentence and put the game/year on screen.
Body & pacing
At 42 seconds, the reply is much longer than the question requires. Give the answer, show gameplay and exit.
Sales argument
FIFA-specific proof can convert football-gaming buyers, but the current post generated almost no engagement. Use exact versions and smooth gameplay as the value evidence.
Call to action
Invite the next useful reply and the sale: “Which game should I test next? The console is in the basket.”
Retention
Average watch was 5.04s on 42s, completion 1.3% and the largest drop at 0:02. The relevance is narrow but the delivery is still too slow.
Fix these first
Highest-impact changes
["Answer the exact FIFA question in frame one","Show gameplay instead of setup","Keep reply videos under 15 seconds"]
Stronger replacement
Improved video concept
Open on FIFA gameplay with the reply bubble: “Yes — it has FIFA [versions]. Here’s how it runs.” Show two clips, answer saving/control quality, then CTA in under 15 seconds.