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VIDEO COACH
Maki reviews your new TikTok posts automatically at 10:00pm each day, identifies what is losing attention or weakening purchase intent, and shows you how to improve the next video.
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Sat, 31 Oct 2026
Coaching report
OPEN VIDEO60/ 100
Visual hook
The reply bubble and recognisable Crash gameplay create a clear reason to watch. Put the game screen larger and earlier.
Text hook
“Here you go — Crash Bandicoot” directly answers demand. Add the exact game(s) and the no-Wi-Fi benefit immediately.
Body & pacing
The demonstration has genuine proof, but 49 seconds is excessive. A single clean gameplay clip, save test and CTA would be stronger.
Sales argument
This variant has the best average watch among the three replies and 1.9% search traffic, showing specific nostalgia works. It still needs a shorter path from question to product value.
Call to action
Close with “Comment the next game you want tested — console’s in the basket” to generate both follow-up content and intent.
Retention
Average watch was 6.69s, the strongest of the reply posts, but completion was only 0.8% on 49s and the main drop was at 0:02.
Fix these first
Highest-impact changes
["Make Crash gameplay fill frame one","State no downloads/no Wi-Fi in the first sentence","Cut to 15 seconds and solicit the next game request"]
Stronger replacement
Improved video concept
Reply bubble over Crash gameplay: “Yes — Crash Bandicoot, no downloads and no Wi-Fi.” Show level loading and one gameplay moment, then price/CTA by 12–15 seconds.